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  1. 22nd March 2011, 12:55 PM #1
    alison.z
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    2011 Swans Season Preview

    Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:

    2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.
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  2. 22nd March 2011, 01:09 PM #2
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    That's a great preview a.z.
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  3. 22nd March 2011, 01:14 PM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by alison.z View Post
    Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:

    2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.
    Good work Alison. You write really well.
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  4. 22nd March 2011, 01:26 PM #4
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    Meet Alison
    Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar
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  5. 22nd March 2011, 01:40 PM #5
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    Nice write up, Alison.

    One thing I noticed though:
    Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar
    You seem to have left out an apostrophe in the heading:
    2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview
    Sorry, but I'm a stickler for it myself sometimes...
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  6. 22nd March 2011, 02:00 PM #6
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    I didn't do the heading!!!

    Haha i had a spelling error in the first paragraph and had to email the site to get them to change it - it was distressing me so much!
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  7. 22nd March 2011, 02:02 PM #7
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    Ok i found another error in my work - I give up and retract that statement about me!
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  8. 22nd March 2011, 02:04 PM #8
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    oh oh oh.... how about

    It has been a seamless transition from as Paul Roos handed the reigns to John Longmire
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    I knew him as a gentle young man, I cannot say for sure the reasons for his decline
    We watched him fade before our very eyes, and years before his time
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  9. 22nd March 2011, 02:04 PM #9
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    Thanks Alison, nice work.
    He reminds him of the guys, close-set, slow, and never rattled, who were play-makers on the team. (John Updike, seeing Josh Kennedy in a crystal ball)
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    I wood of helped with proofreading! You shood of axed me!

    (PS - great article!)
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  11. 22nd March 2011, 02:24 PM #11
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    Stop nit picking. She spelled Tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.
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  12. 22nd March 2011, 02:26 PM #12
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    Quote Originally Posted by stellation View Post
    oh oh oh.... how about



    This is fun!
    That's the point at which i gave up! I got Tadhg, Hannebery and Kieren all right so i guess it's fine then
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