Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:
2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.
Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:
2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.
Geez, I beter watch me pees and queues's.Meet Alison
Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar
Driver of the Dan Hannebery bandwagon....all aboard. 4th April 09
Nice write up, Alison.
One thing I noticed though:
You seem to have left out an apostrophe in the heading:Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar
Sorry, but I'm a stickler for it myself sometimes...2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview
I didn't do the heading!!!
Haha i had a spelling error in the first paragraph and had to email the site to get them to change it - it was distressing me so much!
Ok i found another error in my work - I give up and retract that statement about me!
oh oh oh.... how about
This is fun!It has been a seamless transition from as Paul Roos handed the reigns to John Longmire
I knew him as a gentle young man, I cannot say for sure the reasons for his decline
We watched him fade before our very eyes, and years before his time
Thanks Alison, nice work.
He reminds him of the guys, close-set, slow, and never rattled, who were play-makers on the team. (John Updike, seeing Josh Kennedy in a crystal ball)
I wood of helped with proofreading! You shood of axed me!
(PS - great article!)
Stop nit picking. She spelled Tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.
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