The line under discussion actually seems to be a non sequitur.
Swans will go in and win over all
While her loyal sons are marching
Onwards to victory!
How do the Swans “go in and win” if they are busily marching?
So I suggest:
Swans will go in and win over all
While our loyal fans are cheering
Onwards to victory!
Makes more sense and solves the sons/daughters issue ......i
Ps: it’s actually the Notre Dame band that does the marching not the players.
https://youtu.be/c43ViMMspxQ
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